Timey Wimey - Prologue

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Possible to change some words of the translation.

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7 comments

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Panel 1: Applejack's statement is missing a period; Starswirl's is missing a comma. Also: “…could help her in…”

Panel 2: Applejack's statement is awkwardly worded. Try, “Gosh, and I thought my daily chores were tiring.”

Panel 3: Twilight's statement is missing a comma.

Panel 4: There's a space preceding the second question mark.

Sorry if I seem a bit pushy. I just want this to turn out as good as it can.

Feb 13, 2016

Lum said:

Oh don't worry, no problem! We're gonna rectify that! Thank you!

Feb 13, 2016

Lum said:

Aaand done!

Feb 16, 2016

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Not quite. There's still a comma missing in Panel 3.

Feb 16, 2016

Lum said:

Where?

Feb 17, 2016

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

At the end of the word “task”.

Feb 17, 2016

Lum said:

Aah, in French, we never put a comma before “but”!

Feb 18, 2016

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