Timey Wimey - Prologue

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Possible to change some words of the translation.

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3 comments

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Panel 1: Missing comma between “welcome” and “Princess”.

Panel 2: Missing comma between “Well” and “by”, missing space between “telling” and “us”, “that” would be more appropriate than “this”.

Panel 5: Missing commas both before and after “well”.

Panel 7: Missing comma between “here” and “but”.

Feb 27, 2016

Lum said:

Done!

Feb 27, 2016

Visitor (Anonymous ) said:

Lol, guess Starswirled is not so smart after all

Feb 28, 2016

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