Timey Wimey - Prologue

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Possible to change some words of the translation.

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5 comments

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Panel 1: Pinkie's second sentence would sound more natural as, “He was clearly loco!” Also, Twilight's second sentence is missing a comma.

Panel 2: Dash's second sentence is missing an “of”.

Panel 4: Twilight's first sentence is missing a comma.

Mar 12, 2016

Lum said:

Can you be more specific, please? We really want to correct those little mistakes but they aren't necessarily visible to us even after your message =/

Mar 13, 2016

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

"It's Starswirl, after all!“ ”I won't stand being kicked out of a mere tornado, even a magic one.“ ”Get ready, girls!"

Mar 13, 2016

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Actually, I just noticed that Dash's first sentence is also missing a comma. "Nah, we're going!" Sorry I missed that before.

Mar 13, 2016

Lum said:

Oookay done!

Mar 13, 2016

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