Timey Wimey - Prologue

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Possible to change some words of the translation.

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Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Panel 4: Rainbow Dash's wording is awkward. Try, “We've been trying to help from the start!” Also, Tempora's second “us” should be a “we” and there should be a comma at the end of “chaos”, as it immediately precedes “but”.

Panel 5: Drop the “er” from the end of Rainbow Dash's line.

Aug 26, 2016

Visitor (Lum) said:

Thank you!

Aug 26, 2016

Visitor (GWMcHaffie) said:

Panel 5: "Could //we have// caused this by traveling through time?"

Sep 2, 2016

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